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Aw, thanks! I didn't post all of the Imaginary Daughter comics here on account of ToonPool not being really storyline oriented. If you'd like to keep reading, please drop by my main site. Again, thanks for your comments :)

Hi Karchesky!I like ur style, really great comics!Greetings Jule

Again,you're welcome! =)

you're welcome!Glad that I can help =)
best wishes,
mariposa :D

Thanks Harm! I'm glad you like it and I hope you continue reading it :)
Thank you for your criticism as well. The truth is I'm just an amateur cartoonist, but I'm looking forwards to become better at this craft. In fact much of the purpose of "Imaginary Daughter" is to provide me with something where I can practice and hone my [meager] drawing/storytelling skills.
I'm aware of the "wooden" look of the characters. I'm trying to make them a bit more dynamic, at least as far as the plot permits it. Hopefully the latest strips (on my site) are better in this sense? Though I know I have a long way to go...
Color in the strips has been rather hit or miss, with more "miss" than anything. Here I'm also torn between narrowing down the palette and getting a more coherent look, or go for the whole color spectre and get some eye-candy going (people do seem to like more color). So, I guess I'll just keep on experimenting...
I know what you mean about ToonPool. I don't know if I'll upload the remaining strips. Perhaps, as you say, a few choice ones would work better. On the other hand, I only update the strip once a week, so maybe just the one strip per week would work out alright? I don't know...
Anyways, thanks for your insight and I hope you keep reading Imaginary Daughter :)

hi karchesky,
i like your story "Imaginary Daughter" and read all availble pages at your website. it's a bit like theater for two persons. very interesting.
although i think you have to work on your style. it sometimes looks a bit "wooden". same on the colours. more homogeneously would look better. this "critics" should not sound arrogantly and should not discourage you. it's just my point of view as a professional comic book artist. all in all i think you have great potential!
on the other hand: in my opinion toonpool isn't the right place to present a complete comic story. people will not be able to read the pages in the right order. toonpool is more for single cartoons or one page comics. imagine somebody would upload a complete manga book. it would overflow the portal. i suggest to upload only a few selected pages with a hint in the picture and in the artist comment like "example from my work Imaginary Daughter. full story at http://karchesky.com/"

all the best,
harm

Thanks, I hope you like the future strips as well!

hey! I like ur comics - interesting style

Thank you, gracias... that's about it for my language skills ;)

hi karchesky, welcome, bemvindo, benvenido , ask mariposa here, she's up to date with Spanish...:)